diff templates/sat_website/overview.html @ 45:62c23067e86e

improve English texts following recommandations from Florian
author souliane <souliane@mailoo.org>
date Mon, 27 Apr 2015 16:21:45 +0200
parents d721c8ffa22a
children a18800261cf6
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--- a/templates/sat_website/overview.html	Tue Jan 27 18:28:06 2015 +0100
+++ b/templates/sat_website/overview.html	Mon Apr 27 16:21:45 2015 +0200
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 	            </div>
 	            <div class="col-md-11">
 	                Salut à Toi (SàT) is currently under development.
-	                <div class="lead">{% blocktrans %}Multi-purposes, multi-frontends, libre and decentralised communication tool.{% endblocktrans %}</div>
+	                <div class="lead">{% blocktrans %}Multipurpose, multi frontend, libre and decentralised communication tool.{% endblocktrans %}</div>
 	            </div>
             </div>
         </h1>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 
         <div class="row">
             <div class="col-md-6">
-                <h3>{% trans "Multi-purposes" %}</h3>
+                <h3>{% trans "Multipurpose" %}</h3>
                 SàT covers a large spectrum of the Internet usages:
                 <ul>
                     <li>{%blocktrans %}<strong>chat</strong> with one or many contacts, in public or private rooms{% endblocktrans %}</li>
@@ -66,14 +66,14 @@
                 <p><a class="btn btn-default" href="features.html" role="button">{% trans "Features" %}</a></p>
             </div>
             <div class="col-md-6">
-                <h3>{% trans "Multi-frontends" %}</h3>
+                <h3>{% trans "Multi frontend" %}</h3>
                 {% blocktrans %}SàT can be used with different interfaces, each of them being a sub-project, but the heart of the software stays the same. You can use SàT:{% endblocktrans %}
                 <ul>
                     <li>{% blocktrans %}with a browser through the <strong>web</strong> interface Libervia{% endblocktrans %}</li>
                     <li>{% blocktrans %}inside a <strong>console</strong> user interface{% endblocktrans %}</li>
                     <li>{% blocktrans %}through a <strong>command line</strong>{% endblocktrans %}</li> 
-                    <li>{% blocktrans %}other frontends are planed (telephones, desktop){% endblocktrans %}</li>
                 </ul>
+                {% blocktrans %}Other frontends are planned (telephones, desktop).{% endblocktrans %}
                 <p><a class="btn btn-default" href="frontends.html" role="button">{% trans "Frontends" %}</a></p>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -81,12 +81,12 @@
         <div class="row">
             <div class="col-md-6">
                 <h3>{% trans "Libre" %}</h3>
-                <p>{% blocktrans %}SàT is not only open source, it's Libre and follows the free software philosophy (free as in freedom). Not only because it's the best way to develop a software, but also for the sharing and freedom spirit. In addition, SàT follows a social contract: a moral engagment with the user.{% endblocktrans %}</p>
+                <p>{% blocktrans %}SàT is not only open source, it's Libre and follows the free software philosophy (free as in freedom). Not only because it's the best way to develop a software, but also in the spirit of sharing and freedom. In addition, SàT follows a social contract: a moral engagment with the user.{% endblocktrans %}</p>
                 <p><a class="btn btn-default" href="social_contract.html" role="button">{% trans "Social contract" %}</a></p>
             </div>
             <div class="col-md-6">
                 <h3>{% trans "Decentralised" %}</h3>
-                <p>{% blocktrans %}SàT is fully decentralised. There is no big server where all the data are stored. That's the only way to fight against censorship, to hinder governmental surveillance and to keep control of your data - you don't want your private pictures or intimate messages to be in the hands of an untrusted commercial company, do you?{% endblocktrans %}</p>
+                <p>{% blocktrans %}SàT is fully decentralised. There is no big server where all the data is kept. This is the only way to fight against censorship, to hinder governmental surveillance and to keep control of your data - you don't want your private pictures or intimate messages to be in the hands of an untrusted commercial company, do you?{% endblocktrans %}</p>
                 <p><a class="btn btn-default" href="principles.html" role="button">{% trans "Principles" %}</a></p>
             </div>
         </div>