diff templates/sat_website/features.html @ 67:ae46991a3489

English correction (typos and improvements) by Florian and Rachelle
author souliane <souliane@mailoo.org>
date Tue, 26 May 2015 21:23:56 +0200
parents 0d20fb28c32e
children 4b4a5d7602f8
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--- a/templates/sat_website/features.html	Sat May 16 18:45:05 2015 +0200
+++ b/templates/sat_website/features.html	Tue May 26 21:23:56 2015 +0200
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 	            <strong>{% trans "Blogging" %}</strong>
 	        </div>
 	        <div class="col-md-7 feature">
-	            {% blocktrans %}Share your thought with microblogs or write longer articles with rich text blog messages. Together with a picture manager (not available yet, but you can still link external pictures), this covers some of the most popular Internet usecases. The big difference with other popular services is that you can easily decide who will be able to read your messages and you can keep the full control over your data. Better host it yourself, or let it done by an entity you really trust.{% endblocktrans %}
+	            {% blocktrans %}Share your thought with microblogs or write longer articles with rich text blog messages. Together with a picture manager (not available yet, but you can still link external pictures), this covers some of the most popular Internet usages. The big difference from other popular services is that you can easily decide who will be able to read your messages and you can keep the full control over your data. Better host it yourself, or let it be done by an entity you really trust.{% endblocktrans %}
 	        </div>
 	    </div>
 	    <div class="row">
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 	            <strong>{% trans "Chat" %}</strong>
 	        </div>
 	        <div class="col-md-7 feature">
-	            {% blocktrans %}You can talk with one person or follow a group discussion, invite people, record your communication history... If you need to exchange sensitive information - like a password - you can encrypt your messages to ensure that nobody but the person you chose will be able to read it.{% endblocktrans %}
+	            {% blocktrans %}You can talk with one person or follow a group discussion, invite people and record your communication history... If you need to exchange sensitive information - like a password - you can encrypt your messages to ensure that nobody but the chosen person will be able to read it.{% endblocktrans %}
 	        </div>
 	    </div>
 	    <div class="row">
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 	            <strong>{% trans "Activities" %}</strong>
 	        </div>
 	        <div class="col-md-7 feature">
-	            {% blocktrans %}On top of the multi-user chat, you can play games and participate to activities. This is done in the same interface with nothing extra to install. For now we offer a French card game (tarot) and an online radio system that allows you to share some music with your friends and hear it at the same time.{% endblocktrans %}
+	            {% blocktrans %}On top of the multi-user chat, you can play games and participate in activities. This is done in the same interface with nothing extra to install. For now, we offer a French card game (tarot) and an online radio system that allows you to share some music with your friends and listen to it at the same time.{% endblocktrans %}
 	        </div>
 	    </div>
 	    <div class="row">
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 	            <strong>{% trans "File sharing" %}</strong>
 	        </div>
 	        <div class="col-md-7 feature">
-	            {% blocktrans %}Easily send files to your contacts. Later we would like to implement a decentralised file sharing system so you could create a private peer-to-peer network within a group a friends.{% endblocktrans %}
+	            {% blocktrans %}Easily send files to your contacts. Later we would like to implement a decentralised file sharing system so you can create a private peer-to-peer network within a group of friends.{% endblocktrans %}
 	        </div>
 	    </div>
 	    <div class="row">
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
 	            <a href="social_contract.html">{% trans "Social contract" %}</a>
 	        </div>
 	        <div class="col-md-7 feature">
-	            {% blocktrans with social_prefix="<a href=\"social_contract\">" social_suffix="</a>" %}Not really a feature, but certainly one of the most important point: a {{ social_prefix }}social contract{{ social_suffix }} has been written, this is a moral engagement that we are due to follow - we also refer to it in the statutes of the association. SàT is not made for money or trap people, it's a project about freedom and sharing.{% endblocktrans %}
+	            {% blocktrans with social_prefix="<a href=\"social_contract\">" social_suffix="</a>" %}Not really a feature, but certainly one of the most important point: a {{ social_prefix }}social contract{{ social_suffix }} has been written, this is a moral engagement that we are due to follow - we also refer to it in the statutes of the association. SàT is not made for money or to trap people, it's a project about freedom and sharing.{% endblocktrans %}
 	        </div>
 	    </div>
     </div>