changeset 20:50f8d50cb508

social contract: typos fixes
author souliane <souliane@mailoo.org>
date Tue, 29 Oct 2013 15:34:04 +0100
parents d9c6e1b031a9
children 8cfc33e4d435
files sat_website/CONTRAT_SOCIAL_en
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--- a/sat_website/CONTRAT_SOCIAL_en	Mon Feb 25 21:19:11 2013 +0100
+++ b/sat_website/CONTRAT_SOCIAL_en	Tue Oct 29 15:34:04 2013 +0100
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-The project "Salut à Toi" was born from a need to protect our liberties, our privacy and our independance. It is intended to protect the rights and liberties a user has regarding her own private and numeric data, her acquaintance's, and the data she handles; it is also intended to be a human contact point, not substituting itself to physical encounters, but rather facilitating them.
+The project "Salut à Toi" was born from a need to protect our liberties, our privacy and our independence. It is intended to protect the rights and liberties a user has regarding her own private and numeric data, her acquaintance's, and the data she handles; it is also intended to be a human contact point, not substituting itself to physical encounters, but rather facilitating them.
 Salut à Toi will always fight against all forms of technology control by private interests. The global network must belong to everybody, and be a force of expression and freedom for all Mankind.
 
 Towards this end, "Salut à Toi" and those who participate in the project operate on a Social Contract, a commitment to those who use it. This Contract involves the following points :
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@
     - The freedom to improve the program, and release your improvements (and modified versions in general) to the public, so that the whole community benefits.
 You have the full possibility to install your own version of "Salut à Toi" on your own machine, to verify - and understand - how it works, adapt it to your needs, and share the knowledge with your friends.
 
-- The information regarding the user belong to her, and we will never have the pretention - and indecency ! - to consider the content that she produces or relays via "Salut à Toi" as our property. As well, we commit ourselves to never make profit from selling any of her presonal information.
+- The information regarding the user belong to her, and we will never have the pretention - and indecency ! - to consider the content that she produces or relays via "Salut à Toi" as our property. As well, we commit ourselves to never make profit from selling any of her personal information.
 
-- We greatly encourage a general _decentralisation_. "Salut à Toi" being based on a decentralised protocol (XMPP), he is by nature decentralised. This is essential for a better protection of your information, a better resistance to censorship and hardware or software failures, and to alleviate authoritarian tendencies.
+- We greatly encourage a general _decentralisation_. "Salut à Toi" being based on a decentralised protocol (XMPP), it is by nature decentralised. This is essential for a better protection of your information, a better resistance to censorship and hardware or software failures, and to alleviate authoritarian tendencies.
 
-- By fighting against the attempts at private control and comercial abuses of the global network, and trying to remain independant, we are absolutely opposed to any form of advertisement: you will *never* see any advertisement coming from us
+- By fighting against the attempts at private control and commercial abuses of the global network, and trying to remain independent, we are absolutely opposed to any form of advertisement: you will *never* see any advertisement coming from us
 
 - The users Equality is essential for us, we refuse any kind of discrimination, being based on geographical location, population category, or any other ground.