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fixes typos in English social contract (Florian and Rachelle)
author souliane <souliane@mailoo.org>
date Sat, 17 Oct 2015 13:11:29 +0200
parents 7fe36f064486
children a3a35ee96dc6
files sat_website/CONTRAT_SOCIAL_en
diffstat 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) [+]
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--- a/sat_website/CONTRAT_SOCIAL_en	Sat Oct 17 13:03:01 2015 +0200
+++ b/sat_website/CONTRAT_SOCIAL_en	Sat Oct 17 13:11:29 2015 +0200
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 
 Towards this end, "Salut à Toi" and those who participate in the project operate on a Social Contract, a commitment to those who use it. This Contract involves the following points :
 
-- We put the freedom at the top of our priorities : freedom of the user, freedom with her data. To achieve this, "Salut à Toi" is a Libre Software - an essential condition - and its infrastructure also relies on Libre Software, meaning softwares that respect the 4 fundamental rules :
+- We put freedom at the top of our priorities : freedom of the user, freedom with her data. To achieve this, "Salut à Toi" is a Libre Software - an essential condition - and its infrastructure also relies on Libre Software, meaning softwares that respect the 4 fundamental rules :
     - The freedom to run the program for any purpose.
     - The freedom to study how the program works, and change it to make it do what you wish.
     - The freedom to redistribute copies so you can help your neighbor.
@@ -14,16 +14,16 @@
 
 - We greatly encourage a general *decentralisation*. "Salut à Toi" being based on a decentralised protocol (XMPP), it is by nature decentralised. This is essential for a better protection of your information, a better resistance to censorship and hardware or software failures, and to alleviate authoritarian tendencies.
 
-- By fighting against the attempts at private control and commercial abuses of the global network, and trying to remain independent, we are absolutely opposed to any form of advertisement: you will *never* see any advertisement coming from us
+- By fighting against the attempts at private control and commercial abuses of the global network, and trying to remain independent, we are absolutely opposed to any form of advertisement: you will *never* see any advertisement coming from us.
 
-- The users Equality is essential for us, we refuse any kind of discrimination, being based on geographical location, population category, or any other ground.
+- The user's Equality is essential to us, we refuse any kind of discrimination, being based on geographical location, population category, or any other grounds.
 
 - We will do whatever is possible to fight against any kind of censorship. The global network must be a means of expression for everyone.
 
 - We refuse the mere idea of an absolute authority regarding the decisions taken for "Salut à Toi" and how it works, and the choice of decentralisation and the use of Libre Software allows to reject all hierarchy.
 
 - The idea of Fraternity is essential. This is why:
-    - we will help the users, whatever their computer literacy is, to the extent of what we can
-    - we will as well commit ourselves to help the accessibility to "Salut à Toi" for all
+    - We will help the users, whatever their computer literacy is, to the extent of which we can.
+    - We will as well commit ourselves to help the accessibility to "Salut à Toi" for all.
     - "Salut à Toi" , XMPP, and the technologies used help facilitate the electronic exchanges, but we strive to focus on real and human exchanges : we will always favor Real on Virtual.